谁能帮我的作文改成pass tenseDevotion When I was nine years old, I felt I am so close to god, I was in the train station and lost my dad, I just keep crying and being nervous, so I pray for god that I can meet my dad again, after that.

谁能帮我的作文改成pass tenseDevotion When I was nine years old, I felt I am so close to god, I was in the train station and lost my dad, I just keep crying and being nervous, so I pray for god that I can meet my dad again, after that.
谁能帮我的作文改成pass tense
Devotion When I was nine years old, I felt I am so close to god, I was in the train station and lost my dad, I just keep crying and being nervous, so I pray for god that I can meet my dad again, after that. The station agent ask me why I am crying and I said: I lose my dad. And the station agent ask me what is my dad’s phone number, after I told him my dad’s phone number and the station agent used his cell-phone to call my dad for me so I can talk with him and told my dad I was at the ticket booth at the same station with him , two minutes later, my dad came back and said: where did you go? I was so confused because I didn’t go anywhere so I ask him back: “where did you go?” After that, we huge each other and went home. (∩_∩) When I got home, I was by myself at my room and thinking about what just happen in the train station, and how I ask god to bring my dad back, now I know that god is listening and because my dad came back right away and everything was OKI thank God for that day, and for showing me that he loves me and protect me, and I pray that God will love and protect us all.

谁能帮我的作文改成pass tenseDevotion When I was nine years old, I felt I am so close to god, I was in the train station and lost my dad, I just keep crying and being nervous, so I pray for god that I can meet my dad again, after that.
你这篇文章时态用的太混乱了啊.全篇改为一般过去时.如下：When I was nine years old,I felt I was so close to god,I was in the train station and lost my dad,I just kept crying and being nervous,so I prayed for god that I could meet my dad again,after that.The station agent asked me why I was crying and I said:I lose my dad.And the station agent asked me what was my dad’s phone number,after I told him my dad’s phone number and the station agent used his cell-phone to call my dad for me so I could talk with him and told my dad I was at the ticket booth at the same station with him ,two minutes later,my dad came back and said:where did you go?I was so confused because I didn’t go anywhere so I asked him back:“where did you go?” After that,we huged each other and went home.(∩_∩) When I got home,I was by myself at my room and thought about what just happened in the train station,and how I asked god to bring my dad back,now I knew that god was listening and because my dad came back right away and everything was OKI thank God for that day,and for showing me that he loves me and protect me,and I pray that God will love and protect us all.后面的我感觉不用变了,用一般现在时就可以了.