给这篇文章打分.以“My Uncle's Family”为题写一段话,要求语义通顺,情境适当.文章:My Uncle's FamilyMy name is Li Mingwei.This is my uncle's family.Look,they are my uncle and aunt,they look very young.They like swimming very

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给这篇文章打分.以“My Uncle's Family”为题写一段话,要求语义通顺,情境适当.文章:My Uncle's FamilyMy name is Li Mingwei.This is my uncle's family.Look,they are my uncle and aunt,they look very young.They like swimming very

给这篇文章打分.以“My Uncle's Family”为题写一段话,要求语义通顺,情境适当.文章:My Uncle's FamilyMy name is Li Mingwei.This is my uncle's family.Look,they are my uncle and aunt,they look very young.They like swimming very
给这篇文章打分.
以“My Uncle's Family”为题写一段话,要求语义通顺,情境适当.
文章:
My Uncle's Family
My name is Li Mingwei.This is my uncle's family.Look,they are my uncle and aunt,they look very young.They like swimming very much.And this is my cousin Li Lei and Li Mei.We are students.We often play volleyball together.We are good friends.
只需看文章有没有什么语法错误或单词拼错,如果有好的建议欢迎提出!)

给这篇文章打分.以“My Uncle's Family”为题写一段话,要求语义通顺,情境适当.文章:My Uncle's FamilyMy name is Li Mingwei.This is my uncle's family.Look,they are my uncle and aunt,they look very young.They like swimming very
And this is my cousin Li Lei and Li Mei
这句的单复数不对
改:And that are my cousins Li Lei and Li Mei

10分啊
反正我是没有发现什么错误
不过结尾如果能回到题目“叔叔”来就更好了

10分