雅思大作文里这类题目怎么破题?Some people believe that air travel should restricted because it cause serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources .To what extent do you agree or disagree?像这个题,它到底是要我同

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雅思大作文里这类题目怎么破题?Some people believe that air travel should restricted because it cause serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources .To what extent do you agree or disagree?像这个题,它到底是要我同

雅思大作文里这类题目怎么破题?Some people believe that air travel should restricted because it cause serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources .To what extent do you agree or disagree?像这个题,它到底是要我同
雅思大作文里这类题目怎么破题?
Some people believe that air travel should restricted because it cause serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
像这个题,它到底是要我同意(不同意)什么?这个句子我分析了下可以拆成三个部分.
1飞机旅行应该被限制(because前面部分)
2飞机旅行造成了污染(because后面部分)
3飞机旅行造成的污染跟它被限制之间的联系的正确性(句子整体联系)
我写的练习是把三个都分析一遍.
第一段 应当被适当限制.
1因为有的飞机使用是多余的,可以被远程通讯代替.
2飞机旅行确实造成了一定污染.
3但是我们应该平衡使用飞机的得失,有污染不代表我们就要全盘否定飞机使用.
最后总结,只能在一定程度上限制使用飞机.
这样写行吗,尤其是第一个论点?这篇文章需要每个部分紧扣污染与飞机的联系吗?

雅思大作文里这类题目怎么破题?Some people believe that air travel should restricted because it cause serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources .To what extent do you agree or disagree?像这个题,它到底是要我同
我考过GRE的,作文和这个还是有一定的类似.分析一下.可以是partly agree或partly disagree. 即基本上不同意或基本上同意.我写partly agree. 1.it indeed causes pollution and resumes resources.In this aspect, it should be restricted.2. however, distant travelling needs airplane, it turns out to be difficult without the aid of plane. 3. Comparing to the huge earth resources and environment, the amount used by plane is tiny and can be ignored. We could also plant more trees. 就是这样.第一个肯定,后两个否定.