作业帮看看有语法错误或者不精彩的地方~大学六级~How to improve students` mental health?As a college student,we should have healthy thoughts.Mentle health is important to us.So I have some idea.Four years,we have too much time in our colleg
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看看有语法错误或者不精彩的地方~大学六级~How to improve students` mental health?As a college student,we should have healthy thoughts.Mentle health is important to us.So I have some idea.Four years,we have too much time in our colleg
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How to improve students` mental health?
As a college student,we should have healthy thoughts.Mentle health is important to us.So I have some idea.
Four years,we have too much time in our college .So colleges`activities or educations influent us much more.Many times ,an activity will change a college student .What`s more ,some actions will direct us who are pure on today`s society.Our colleges can do some positive activities to give college students a better environment.Of course,ourselves should do something ,too.
We should give ourseives muchi belif.We must think we are the best .We can do it better!After take the hints,We should do it.Sometimes ,we can also listen to relax music or watch humourous movies to let our sad feeling go away.
These are my suggests.If my suggests will be followed,Ithink we will have healthy feelings.
看看有语法错误或者不精彩的地方~大学六级~How to improve students` mental health?As a college student,we should have healthy thoughts.Mentle health is important to us.So I have some idea.Four years,we have too much time in our colleg
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可以多点从句。标点符号也要注意一下，从句之间用逗号。
这个作为cet6 及格都很难啊……还是先背点模板再结合自己的水平写吧
My god,要改的不是一般的多啊
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