作业帮英文短句correction,请帮我看看我的paragraph有没有grammar mistakeAccording to the data,drinking only one cup of the regular Pepsi will not increase your heart rate.If caffeine can raises our heart rate,the heart rates of those 11 students
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英文短句correction,请帮我看看我的paragraph有没有grammar mistakeAccording to the data,drinking only one cup of the regular Pepsi will not increase your heart rate.If caffeine can raises our heart rate,the heart rates of those 11 students
英文短句correction,
请帮我看看我的paragraph有没有grammar mistake
According to the data,drinking only one cup of the regular Pepsi will not increase your heart rate.If caffeine can raises our heart rate,the heart rates of those 11 students who had the regular Pepsi should be increases; however,the data shows only five students had their heart rates increased.After taking the caffeine free Pepsi,five out of 11 students had their heart rates increased.Therefores,drinking a small amount of caffeine can't raises your heart rate.
英文短句correction,请帮我看看我的paragraph有没有grammar mistakeAccording to the data,drinking only one cup of the regular Pepsi will not increase your heart rate.If caffeine can raises our heart rate,the heart rates of those 11 students
原文the heart rates of those 11 students who had the regular Pepsi should be increases,应为the heart rates of those 11 students who had the regular Pepsi should increased
drink only one cup
can raise
should be increased
Therefore
can't raise
only 应该放在drink前面，heart后面要加disease，raises改成raise
the heart rates.....should be increases这句话错了，who修饰人的，但是前面的宾语是heart disease rates。
free 改成 out of.
therefores 改成 therefore
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