She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?

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She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?

She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?
She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?

She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?
整体还是不错,不过had 后面最好加一个a,也就是She threw a bottle which had a piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.

还行。最好是in which

很不错了。
(不过如果你是大学生,那么用词,造句什么的,要加强。)